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Slow Rotation

By Alan Luu on July 5, 2008

The slow rotation of this earth
Allows my thoughts to simmer
My emotions to have free roam
Without a leash or accountability
My dreams are on a low burn
As the world slowly turns
And I wonder if they will harden and carbonize
On the steady flame
The air is thick on a night like tonight
And the nation celebrates its independence
By parking far, [...]

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  • Juan Larrazabal in About: i think you are awesome man.
  • lisa marie galiber in Dance Dance Extravaganza: cool stuff…thank u for posting
  • Mike Tyus in IQ: I like” Pissed Covered Mirror” nice image!
  • Parepidemos in Slow Rotation: Nice! Glad I stopped in to see what’s up with you. Wish I could exercise my poetmuscle, but there’s something about extended seasons of conflict that cause it to atrophy… will it harden & carbonize? Or soften and catch fire? Grace…
  • Alan Luu (facebook) in Recovery: It's cool I guess, that I don't have to deal with contacts…but man, sometimes in life you just expect more. I want to be able to see through walls or something. Read signs from a mile away, etc etc. But for what it is, I guess it's cool.
  • Sheila Romero (facebook) in Recovery: Congrats, Alan! I, too, possess the awesome revelation of LASIK!! I had my surgery over a week ago and I'm lovin' it better than McD's! LOL
  • Sean Linal facebook in Recovery: You've stepped up to SL vision. Let's talk about signs we can read a block away sometime. I'm very thankful for that by the way.